I like how your story about music has shaped your life. I appreciate you trying to pass that on to people. You have excellent pictures and speaking styles that make your presentation awesome.
I loved how you did background research on your own story with the guy you vistited in the retirement home and then shared both the personal story and then the facts behind it.
Zoey, I know that I can't play or write music, but listening to music is something that I do everyday. I can relate to how music makes you feel. Your emotional connection to your topic added to your speech.
I really connected with your topic because as a musician, I know the impact that music makes on people. For me, playing music just makes me happy and I enjoy seeing how it makes other people happy.
I like your personal stories and how you share your passion of music with all of us through your personal thoughts and ideas. You have definitely helped me to look for the music that is hidden in my life and how it affects me without me even knowing.
I like how your story about music has shaped your life. I appreciate you trying to pass that on to people. You have excellent pictures and speaking styles that make your presentation awesome.
ReplyDeleteYour personal experiences were extremely powerful and your passion for music was very evident.
ReplyDeleteAwesome stories! I can see the passion that you have your music and how it could help others.
ReplyDeleteZoey H, your sympathetic and emotional talk was powerful and challenging to comprehend how it impacted you.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you did background research on your own story with the guy you vistited in the retirement home and then shared both the personal story and then the facts behind it.
ReplyDeleteVery powerful and unique topic. It was clear that it was very special to you and you did a very good job presenting it.
ReplyDeleteZoey,Your presentation was fantastic. What you said was really true and the stories you told were very inspiring.
ReplyDeleteZoey, I know that I can't play or write music, but listening to music is something that I do everyday. I can relate to how music makes you feel. Your emotional connection to your topic added to your speech.
ReplyDeleteI know I can speak for alot of people when I say that music is a big part of representing oursleves.
ReplyDeleteI really connected with your topic because as a musician, I know the impact that music makes on people. For me, playing music just makes me happy and I enjoy seeing how it makes other people happy.
ReplyDeleteZoe- I never though of music that way, it was really interesting.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was cool that even though I'm not a musician or anything, I could still easily relate to your topic!
ReplyDeleteI like your personal stories and how you share your passion of music with all of us through your personal thoughts and ideas. You have definitely helped me to look for the music that is hidden in my life and how it affects me without me even knowing.
ReplyDeleteI really like it! I could tell in your stories that you really meant it and it was very personal and relatable.
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