Great job with the personal stories!
Grant-Great TED Talk! Your presentation was sublime! Great job, very inspirational. Thanks to your talk I'm not afraid of 1,000 failures, I'm excited for one success.
Good introduction! I love how personal this is and you are so well prepared and your speech was wonderful!
What an inspiring piece! I loved every minute of it! :)
Grant,I admire your bravery for going first. I love your attention getter because it has so much power behind the two words. I can hear your passion behind your words. I feel inspired by your personal story because it shows your passion and perserverance. The elements of STORY really help me connect to your speech. I love this line "Look how far I've come" because it relates to my experiences with soccer. I think your speech relates to everyone. I love how your personal story inspires everyone and really truly makes people believe that they can do anything and not to stop when they fail. GREAT WAY TO BEGIN OUR FINALS!!Bekah
That was very motivating to do what we know we can! People do not believe in what they can do, and we need to know that we can get to where we need to go. I think that your points were very valid, and that your presentation was very well put out. Great job!
Wow. Words can't describe. That was so fantastic!
Grant that was truly amazing. It really inspired me. A week ago I set a goal for myself to make varsity soccer as a junior. This may not seem like much, but if you look at the team now most of them started on varsity as a freshman. Your speech inspires me to work my hardest to achieve that goal and to never give up. Great work!!!!
That was so amazing and inspiring. I was so floored. The way you included stories and video from your own life made it all the more powerful. That was such an incredible message. FANTASTIC JOB!!!!
You spoke very strongly and had good pauses. You were very convincing and you really appealed to the emotional side of the audience. GOOD JOB!!
Grant,You have great inflection. Your story was very personal. You used stories very well throughout your talk. I liked your message a lot.
Grant- I have just been blown away. Yes I almost cried, and I just loved the way you raised your voice to each important point that you were trying to make. Loved it!
Grant-What a great way to start us off! That was so amazing and powerful! What a great story and the way you presented was so good! Your message came across perfectly, and I loved it. The way you included your own personal stories was so moving, and I loved it.
Grant that was awesome. Although you didnt make A League this year, how far you came is amazing. Great Job and keep swimming!!!