You talked very fast! I think this worked for your advantage though. It made me engage in what you were saying. It also allowed you to get all of your point across.
Sam: Your Talk was powerful to hear, but was very quickly spoken. Suggestions in your talk was very important to the topic you talked about, compassion.
I loved how you used different voice tones throughout your speech! The way you did that kept it interesting and kept the audience on their toes because they were always waiting to hear what came next.
Sam, you did a really amazing job. The whole time I was very engaged in what you were saying and it was obvious that you are very passionate about your topic. I really loved your presentation and completely agree that compassion would make a better world for the future. Great job!
Sam: You sounded really confident! I really liked your ideas! You also sounded really well rehearsed:)
ReplyDeleteNice energy! It kept me interested. Your sources and quotes are very interesting and your message is really visionary.
ReplyDeleteWow! What would our life be like if we had different values than we do now?
ReplyDeleteYou obviously care a lot about this topic. It made it much more engaging.
ReplyDeleteYou bring up a very interesting point and I really noticed your passion for what you were talking about!
ReplyDeleteGood job. You presented your topic with so much enthusiasm that it was catchy. However, you went a little fast
ReplyDeleteYou talked very fast! I think this worked for your advantage though. It made me engage in what you were saying. It also allowed you to get all of your point across.
ReplyDeleteAwesome Sam! That was a great talk. I can see what you are talking about. You were really great on stage, your speaking techniques were great.
ReplyDeleteSam: Your Talk was powerful to hear, but was very quickly spoken. Suggestions in your talk was very important to the topic you talked about, compassion.
ReplyDeleteI really agree with what your saying. I thought your TED wish was great because it clearly displalyed what youd would like us to do.
ReplyDeleteSam- I really like your idea. It is very unique and your speech really backed it up with a lot of points.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you used different voice tones throughout your speech! The way you did that kept it interesting and kept the audience on their toes because they were always waiting to hear what came next.
ReplyDeleteSam- Your speech was really good and I liked how you spoke with power and and presented your ideas with a lot of passion.
ReplyDeleteSam, great talk. I liked how you incorporated a future goal, the proposal was new an original.
ReplyDeleteI loved your quote from the Dalai Lama! It really added to your speech.
ReplyDeleteSam you were really great! I loved how you incorporated references to Harrison Bergeron and other books we read. You looked professional. Good job!
ReplyDeleteSam, your passion really added to your message.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with your topic. I think that if we, as a society, emphasized compassion, our world would be a better place!
ReplyDeleteSam, you did a really amazing job. The whole time I was very engaged in what you were saying and it was obvious that you are very passionate about your topic. I really loved your presentation and completely agree that compassion would make a better world for the future. Great job!
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