Since music is so important for culture today this viewpoint can be really important to society.
Jeremy: I played the piano for a really long time and I remember how it made me feel academically, emotionally, and physically. I loved playing it but my schedule was too busy so I could not keep doing it. :(
Great topic! I personally connected to your talk because I too play an instrument. I know that I also work better when there is soft music in the background.
Jeremy- Although I am not musically inclined, I am good at learning with music in the air. The music also motivates me to do better with whatever I am doing.
You very clearly elaborated on all of music's benefits and your presentation was very informational!
You had some great facts that supported your point. The ideas that you presented were enlightening and I was glad that I heard your talk today.
jeremy-that was really entertaining! Great speech!
Great job Jeremy, it really enhanced your performance that you were so passionate for your topic
Your supporting information strengthened your points and your speech was very clear.
You had good points and a lot of supporting details that really made your topic come alive. Good job!