Savannah- I like how you broke down your speech. It made it much more organized. Also, I like your slides, alternating between quotes, your speech points, and definitions. Your use of humor made your speech better.
I really liked the statistics and facts, as well as the quotes that you incorporated into your TED Talk! Your things to remember were also spot on, and I hope that with it we will have the power to change the world for the better.
Good job. You talked a little bit fast, but your topic came across strong and clear. Your examples were good and I loved the quotes on the screen. Loved your topic and how you presented!
Savannah, I really like your use of slides with the pictures, definitions, and main points. Be careful with how fast you talk, but overall it was great! You sounded very educated and confident in your speech. I like your use of humor, and how you tell the audience to actively change their life. AMAZING JOB! Bekah
Great job! I think that as teenagers we are influenced and intimidated very easy which doesn't make us as open to things. We don't realize how important our experiences are and how we can use them to our advantage when we are standing up for ourselves. Good topic!
It's really amazing to hear you "speak out" about this! Total agreement with finding the balance between not letting yourself get run over and yelling at people! Great job!
Savannah- Girl you did great! I really enjoyed all of the connections!:)
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ReplyDeleteI like how you broke down your speech. It made it much more organized. Also, I like your slides, alternating between quotes, your speech points, and definitions. Your use of humor made your speech better.
I really liked the statistics and facts, as well as the quotes that you incorporated into your TED Talk! Your things to remember were also spot on, and I hope that with it we will have the power to change the world for the better.
ReplyDeleteGood job. You talked a little bit fast, but your topic came across strong and clear. Your examples were good and I loved the quotes on the screen. Loved your topic and how you presented!
ReplyDeleteGood Job! Great visual aid and your speech was very orgainizided
ReplyDeleteSavannah,
ReplyDeleteI really like your use of slides with the pictures, definitions, and main points. Be careful with how fast you talk, but overall it was great! You sounded very educated and confident in your speech. I like your use of humor, and how you tell the audience to actively change their life. AMAZING JOB!
Bekah
Great job! I think that as teenagers we are influenced and intimidated very easy which doesn't make us as open to things. We don't realize how important our experiences are and how we can use them to our advantage when we are standing up for ourselves. Good topic!
ReplyDeleteGreat Speech! It was very organized, and I liked the elements of humor!!
ReplyDeleteIt's really amazing to hear you "speak out" about this! Total agreement with finding the balance between not letting yourself get run over and yelling at people! Great job!
ReplyDeleteSavannah - This is so true. People need to stand up. Great job giving us all something to think about. Great job! - Grant
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